The animation is somewhat strange, it's good, but also a bit rough. The box scequence was really poorly done and degrades the whole production. The main theme was close to the Omen in that a strange terrible force is locked up in something and also i found millions of horror movies clichés. I found no point or lesson to it and I think that when you make a serious movie you look to find a lesson or a reflection, else its just not good. Correct me and prove me wrong and I shall stay quiet, but until then, although great animation, it just didn't do it, and has little to no story. except the dad, dog, kid, george and his wife.
Though, i think the 10 meg file is due to the music, you've gotta lower its kps rate so it dosent take up that much space. Anyways, the graphics where incredible. Although sometimes I didn't hear music and it felt it needed music, or it ran a bit slow, with practise this will disappear. kepp up the good work!!
well im still having some troble dealing with music and sound, anyway thanks
Good concepts, better Graphics
It's good in concept, though maybe a stronger approach would enphasize the theme you want to give. Great graphics by the way...
It sort of swings between weak and strong throughout, but I tried to stay mainly with the weaker approach to emphasize how the little kid would have told the story, if he had had to right then and there. Im glad you liked it, and the graphics, they took a while to do.
thanks for the comments!
Great Short, but...
... it's too short, not even 30 seconds.
The animating style was excellent, good colour, amazing graphics, I would only recommend something a bit longer and with sound. The idea was funny so I know you have creativity. Keep it up!
A bit off, but hey, thats goth. Nice work, better graphics next time (too much brush tool, try pencil for a change)
A very good work of art. It is very original and it has very good animation, and excellent sound fx plus a good selection of Flash 8 Pro bits. It can be easily seen that you put a lot of time, effort and brains to do this. Keep up the good job!
It is true.
Nice, i like the beagel theme!!!!
i look forward to the BIG COLLAB you'll be doin'. maybe put some flash ma'self. ya never know
BETTER GRAPHICS NEXTTIME!!!!!!
Thanks for the review
Its good, fight sequence WAS expected at the end but ok anyways.
give ya 5 for stuff...
P.S. excellent for ONE day!!!
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